Say THIS in a Loom Video (6x Scripts)

My name is [YOUR NAME] and I wanted to reach out to you for two main reasons.

Firstly, I wanted to let you know that I’m a REAL human creating this quick video just for you, going through your Instagram & showing you things on my screen personally.

And the second reason is, I wanna share something that’s gonna blow your mind.

So the thing is, I have a way through which you can [SPECIFIC OUTCOME THEY WANT] for FREE & get [NUMBER] clients every single month on autopilot.

[SHOW YOUR IG] I used this exact same system to go from [YOUR BEFORE] to [YOUR AFTER] in just [TIMEFRAME], and that has helped me [YOUR REVENUE RESULT].

[SHOW THEIR IG] I see you have [SPECIFIC OBSERVATION ABOUT THEIR CONTENT] – definitely shows dedication and work you’ve put in.

BUT, with the system I’m gonna show you, you’ll have to put the same amount of effort that you’re putting in right now, but you’ll have [BETTER OUTCOME] than you’re getting right now.

[SHOW SYSTEM DIAGRAM/MIRO] So THIS is the system that will allow you to [THEIR GOAL] & get at least [NUMBER] clients every single month.

So firstly, for attention, you need to [STEP 1 OF YOUR PROCESS]… [EXPLAIN BRIEFLY].

[BACK TO THEIR IG] The funny thing about [YOUR METHOD] is, if [SUCCESS SCENARIO], that’s gonna get you [SPECIFIC RESULT]. That’s gonna make you [REVENUE AMOUNT].

You just need two things in place to make everything work:

1. [COMPONENT 1] to bring in the prospects who want to buy from you
2. [COMPONENT 2] to nurture & convert those people to buy from you

[BACK TO SYSTEM DIAGRAM] Once you have [THE SYSTEM] in place, all you have to do is [SIMPLE ACTION] and you’ll get sales calls on autopilot.

And lastly, I’ve dived deep into this entire system in a 100% FREE guide that you can find below this video.

[SHOW FREEBIE] That being said, if you want our help building [WHAT YOU BUILD] where we guarantee [SPECIFIC GUARANTEE] in [TIMEFRAME], you can just send me a message so we can book a quick call and see if we can help you [THEIR GOAL].

I have been able to [YOUR ACHIEVEMENT] to a point where we [CURRENT RESULTS] without [WHAT THEY HATE DOING], which is quite exciting because we’re gonna help you install the same system.

And the best part is, if you don’t get results, you don’t even have to pay us, we’ll refund you all your money.

If that sounds like you, just send me a dm and we’ll get things going.

So I spent about 15 minutes going through [BUSINESS NAME]’s Instagram, and honestly? You’re so close to having something really special here.

[SHOW THEIR IG PROFILE] [FOLLOWER COUNT] followers, [POSTS COUNT] posts, clearly putting in the work…

But I can see exactly why you’re not getting the [REVENUE/CLIENTS/RESULTS] you should be getting with this size audience.

[SCROLL THROUGH THEIR CONTENT] So here’s what I’m seeing: Your content is [POSITIVE OBSERVATION], your [SPECIFIC THING] is really good, and you obviously know your stuff.

But there are 3 gaps that are costing you probably [DOLLAR AMOUNT] per month in missed opportunities.

Gap #1: [SHOW SPECIFIC EXAMPLE] See this post right here? [EXPLAIN WHAT’S WRONG]. This should have [WHAT IT SHOULD HAVE INSTEAD].

Gap #2: [SHOW ANOTHER EXAMPLE] And this one – [EXPLAIN THE PROBLEM]. The fix is actually super simple: [BRIEF SOLUTION].

Gap #3: [OVERALL STRATEGY ISSUE] But the biggest thing is [STRATEGIC PROBLEM]. You’re [WHAT THEY’RE DOING WRONG] when you should be [WHAT THEY SHOULD DO INSTEAD].

[SHOW SUCCESS EXAMPLE] Here’s what this looks like when done right – this is [CLIENT NAME]’s account. They were in the exact same position as you 3 months ago.

[SHOW THEIR RESULTS] Now they’re getting [SPECIFIC RESULTS] because we fixed these exact same 3 things.

[BACK TO THEIR PROFILE] So [NAME], the good news is, you’re already doing the hard part – creating content and building an audience.

The stuff that’s missing? That’s the easy part once you know what to fix.

[TALKING HEAD] I’ve put together a quick action plan for [BUSINESS NAME] that shows exactly how to fix each of these gaps.

It’s in the free guide below this video.

But if you want us to just fix it for you – like we did for [CLIENT NAME] – we can hop on a quick call and I’ll show you exactly what that looks like.

We typically get people [SPECIFIC OUTCOME] within [TIMEFRAME], and if we don’t, you don’t pay.

Sounds fair?

Just shoot me a message if you want to explore that option.

So you asked about [WHAT THEY ASKED ABOUT], and instead of just explaining it, I thought I’d show you exactly how this works by walking through a real case study.

[SHOW CLIENT’S BEFORE STATE] This is [CLIENT NAME]. [TIMEFRAME] ago, they were exactly where you are right now.

[CLIENT’S SITUATION THAT MATCHES PROSPECT’S SITUATION].

They were getting [POOR RESULTS] and feeling pretty frustrated about it.

[SHOW THE STRATEGY] So here’s what we did: [STEP 1], [STEP 2], [STEP 3].

Nothing fancy, nothing complicated. Just a proven system that works.

[SHOW WEEK-BY-WEEK PROGRESS] Week 1: [SMALL WIN] Week 3: [BIGGER WIN]
Week 6: [MAJOR BREAKTHROUGH]

[SHOW FINAL RESULTS] And here’s where they are today: [IMPRESSIVE FINAL OUTCOME].

[BACK TO PROSPECT’S PROFILE] Now [NAME], looking at [BUSINESS NAME], I can see you have [POSITIVE OBSERVATION].

The same strategy that worked for [CLIENT NAME] would work perfectly for your [INDUSTRY/NICHE] business.

Actually, it might work even better because [REASON SPECIFIC TO THEM].

[TALKING HEAD] Here’s what I’m thinking…

You’ve got two options:

Option 1: I can send you the exact playbook we used with [CLIENT NAME]. It’s completely free, breaks down every step, and you can implement it yourself.

Option 2: We can just do it for you. Get on a call, I’ll show you exactly how we’d implement this for [BUSINESS NAME], and if it makes sense, we’ll handle the whole thing.

[SHOW GUARANTEE] Either way, there’s zero risk. If you do it yourself and it doesn’t work, you didn’t pay anything. If we do it and you don’t get [SPECIFIC RESULT] in [TIMEFRAME], we’ll refund every penny.

[CALL TO ACTION] The free playbook is below this video.

If you want to explore option 2, just send me a message saying “CASE STUDY” and I’ll get you the details.

Sound good?

So I spent about 10 minutes going through [BUSINESS NAME]’s [PLATFORM/WEBSITE], and honestly? There’s some really solid stuff here.

[SHOW THEIR CURRENT WORK/CONTENT] Your [SPECIFIC ELEMENT] is [POSITIVE OBSERVATION], and I can see you’re [WHAT THEY’RE DOING RIGHT].

But here’s the thing – I spotted a few opportunities that could probably [SPECIFIC BENEFIT] for you.

[SHOW SPECIFIC EXAMPLE #1] Like this [PIECE OF WORK] right here. It’s good, but imagine if [SPECIFIC IMPROVEMENT]. That would [BENEFIT THEY’D GET].

[SHOW YOUR WORK EXAMPLE] Here’s what I mean – this is similar work I did for [CLIENT NAME]. See the difference? [EXPLAIN THE IMPROVEMENT].

[BACK TO THEIR WORK] And this [ANOTHER PIECE] could be [ANOTHER IMPROVEMENT]. Small change, but it would [SPECIFIC RESULT].

[SHOW YOUR PORTFOLIO EXAMPLE] I actually did something similar for [ANOTHER CLIENT] – went from [BEFORE STATE] to [AFTER STATE]. [RESULT THEY GOT].

[TALKING HEAD] Look [NAME], you’re clearly talented. But sometimes it’s just about knowing which small tweaks can make a huge difference.

I could easily help [BUSINESS NAME] [SPECIFIC OUTCOME] by applying these same improvements.

[SHOW YOUR PROCESS/PACKAGES] I’ve got a few ways we could work together: [PACKAGE 1], [PACKAGE 2], or [PACKAGE 3].

If you want to see exactly what that would look like for [BUSINESS NAME], just shoot me a message and we can hop on a quick call.

No pressure though – even if we don’t work together, hope this gave you some useful ideas!

So you asked about [WHAT THEY ASKED ABOUT], and I thought the best way to show you would be to do a quick competitive analysis.

[SHOW COMPETITOR #1] This is [COMPETITOR NAME] – they’re in the same [INDUSTRY] as you, similar size business.

But look at their [SPECIFIC ELEMENT] – see how they [WHAT THEY’RE DOING DIFFERENTLY]? That’s probably getting them [SPECIFIC RESULT].

[SHOW COMPETITOR #2] And this is [ANOTHER COMPETITOR]. Their [DIFFERENT ELEMENT] is [OBSERVATION]. I bet that’s helping them [ANOTHER BENEFIT].

[BACK TO THEIR BUSINESS] Now looking at [BUSINESS NAME], you’ve got [WHAT THEY DO WELL], which is actually better than both of those competitors.

But you’re missing [WHAT THEY’RE MISSING] and [ANOTHER MISSING ELEMENT].

[SHOW YOUR CLIENT EXAMPLE] Here’s what happens when you fix that – this is [CLIENT NAME], similar business to yours. We added [WHAT YOU ADDED] and they started [RESULT THEY GOT].

[SHOW BEFORE/AFTER] Before: [PREVIOUS STATE] After: [IMPROVED STATE]

[TALKING HEAD] The crazy part? It only took [TIMEFRAME] to implement.

[NAME], you’re already ahead of most of your competitors in [WHAT THEY’RE GOOD AT].

If we just add [YOUR SERVICE BENEFIT], you’d probably be the strongest [BUSINESS TYPE] in your market.

[SHOW YOUR PACKAGES] I could help you implement this exact strategy. Usually takes [TIMEFRAME] and costs [PRICE RANGE].

Want to see exactly what that would look like for [BUSINESS NAME]?

Just message me and I’ll put together a quick plan for you.

Instead of just telling you what I do, I thought I’d show you by walking through a recent project that’s super relevant to [BUSINESS NAME].

[SHOW CLIENT’S BEFORE STATE] This is [CLIENT NAME] – [BRIEF DESCRIPTION OF THEIR BUSINESS].

When they came to me, their [SPECIFIC PROBLEM] was [DESCRIPTION OF PROBLEM].

[SHOW THEIR OLD WORK] Here’s what they had: [SHOW BEFORE EXAMPLES]

As you can see, [PROBLEMS WITH OLD WORK]. They were getting [POOR RESULTS] because of this.

[SHOW YOUR PROCESS] So here’s what we did: [STEP 1], [STEP 2], [STEP 3].

[SHOW WORK IN PROGRESS] This is what it looked like during the process…

[SHOW FINAL RESULTS] And here’s the final result: [SHOW AFTER EXAMPLES]

[SHOW METRICS/RESULTS] The impact? [SPECIFIC MEASURABLE RESULT]. They went from [BEFORE METRIC] to [AFTER METRIC] in just [TIMEFRAME].

[BACK TO PROSPECT’S BUSINESS] Now [NAME], looking at [BUSINESS NAME], I can see some similarities to where [CLIENT NAME] was before we worked together.

Your [CURRENT SITUATION] reminds me of their [SIMILAR SITUATION].

[TALKING HEAD] The same approach that got them [RESULT] would work perfectly for [THEIR BUSINESS TYPE].

Actually, it might work even better because [REASON SPECIFIC TO THEM].

[SHOW YOUR OFFER] If you want to see what this would look like for [BUSINESS NAME], I can put together a quick mockup or proposal.

No obligation – just want to show you the potential.

[CALL TO ACTION] Sound interesting? Just shoot me a message with “TRANSFORMATION” and I’ll get you the details.

Or if you have specific questions about your [BUSINESS/PROJECT], I’m happy to answer those too